If I were to revise my final paper, I would do more research so that I could have more claims and evidence to include. I definitely think that I could have done a better job with adding more sources, especially scholarly ones (but I did use quite a few, of which I am proud of.) With more sources, I would be able to expand on my thoughts and analyze the evidence more, and I would likely benefit from adding a more detailed conclusion, too. Other than that, I think I did a good job with formatting an APA style paper and following the final essay rubric.